内海浩助 发表于 2022-7-26 21:11   全显示 1楼
剧情设定不错，是一篇优秀的催眠洗脑文 不过，唯一美中不足的是……或者说本篇是一篇比较偏向于常识替换类的催眠文，同时，缺少了催眠洗脑文的精髓……例如：通过深度催眠洗脑的方式埋下催眠心锚，肆意的支配、奴役美女们的心灵和身体等兼顾催眠＋洗脑过程的详细描述，哈哈，这样才是催眠洗脑文呀！希望作者大大的下一部作品《将保守的肉感美母变成专属于自己的COSERRBQ吧！》可以考虑一下本人这小小的建议
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